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posted 16th May 2017, 12:44 AM

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16th May 2017, 12:44 AM

dustbunny-studios

I completely changed the dialogue on this page. I think it works much better this way!One more page on this update, check it out!

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16th May 2017, 9:09 AM

Kevtrev

Ah yes, when you think of better ways to phrase things long AFTER the page has gone up.
On the upside, at least that means your writing is improving :D

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23rd May 2017, 6:53 PM

dustbunny-studios

Yeah, ain't it the worst? XD

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